She was commissioned to create a community poem (take note, Poetry Foundation and NEA). The result was a masterwork, a book-length poem that reports and comments on Oswald's River Dart interviews and periodically breaks into a heightened lyric by one of the best lyric poets writing in English. But even the monologues are poetic. One of my favorites sections is the water engineer:You don't know what goes into water. Tiny particles of acids and salts. Cryptospiridion smaller thana fleck of talcom powder which squashes and elongates and bursts in the warmth of the gut. Everything is measured twice and we have stand-bys and shut-offs. This is what keeps you and me alive, this is the real work of the river.
The river is also full of delicious surprises, and Oswald makes the most of them:
On a good day, I can hear the wagtails over the engine
Or I'll hear this cough like a gentleman in the water
I turn round and it's a seal
But it's the people in Dart that are most moving:
Who’s this moving alive over the moor?
An old man seeking and finding a difficulty.
Has he remembered his compass his spare socks
does he fully intend going in over his knees off the
military track from Okehampton?
keeping his course through the swamp spaces
and pulling the distance around his shoulders
Dart is as fascinating as a trip down a great river. I carry it in my purse and dip into it, at any point finding a whole story on a half-page, a high lyric, a song, a tragedy or a laugh. The minute I finished reading it I was furious at her for being so good and thinking of this book before I did, and grateful to her for adding another book to my great books list.
I grew up on the ocean in a fishing town. Dart rang a lot of bells for me (pun intended -- in the 1950s along the docks a lot of ship's bells range on those old-fashioned purse seiner boats of San Pedro's tuna fishing fleet).
I should have interviewed all those fishermen and net-menders and boatbuilders before I left San Pedro. But I didn't have the idea of a long poem about San Pedro until that San Pedro no longer existed, had become the port for cruise ships and Toyota boats. Timing might be an essential ingredient of genius.
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Hi Rachel - Did you know that I used your poem “Humu….’ in the poetry workshop I taught in the L.A. area to youth with very serious problems? I refer to it in my current article at Intersections/Gazebo/Alsop Review. They enjoyed it, but were so intent on their own writing, that we couldn’t discuss it for very long. Thought you’d like to know.
Joyce Nower
Hi, Rachel -
I forgot to thank you for the reference to Alice Oswald. I will buy DART ASAP. Gary Snyder's new book of poems Danger on Peaks is an interesting mix of prose and poetry, too. I have used prose and poetry -in a different manner, to be sure - in a long poem called The Sister Chronicles, which mixes contemporary history and lyric. But I certainly prefer the idea of getting outdoors!!!
Thanks again.
Joyce
Interesting review, Rachel. Enjoyed!
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Joyce -- thanks for using my poem. I appreciate the compliment! And glad you're reading Dart and this blog.
Cheryl & r2K - glad you enjoyed this review.
Great review, thanks!
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Thank you Rachel. I enjoyed this very much!
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