tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9144957.post114523320220826057..comments2023-10-31T09:37:59.862-07:00Comments on Rocket Kid Writing: A good day in poetryRachel Dacushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15754712503067644226noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9144957.post-1145635400344205932006-04-21T09:03:00.000-07:002006-04-21T09:03:00.000-07:00David -- nice one! How you riff these out so easil...David -- nice one! How you riff these out so easily is beyond me. Thanks for the congrats.<BR/><BR/>Nate -- thanks for stopping by and offering your congrats. Much appreciated!<BR/><BR/>RachelRachel Dacushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15754712503067644226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9144957.post-1145325528569489922006-04-17T18:58:00.000-07:002006-04-17T18:58:00.000-07:00[riffing pantoum-wiseon your phrase]I worshiped in...[riffing pantoum-wise<BR/>on your phrase]<BR/><BR/><BR/>I worshiped in the wide style<BR/>when pacing the narrow street<BR/>it's true I flashed a wide smile<BR/>-- my narrow escape was sweet<BR/><BR/>when pacing the narrow street<BR/>as eventide grew dark<BR/>my narrow escape was sweet<BR/>my prospects thus less stark<BR/><BR/>as eventide grew dark<BR/>I espied the lunar bridechild<BR/>my prospects thus less stark<BR/>I worshiped in the wide style<BR/><BR/>-----<BR/><BR/>congrats on the hat-chits,<BR/>d.i.david raphael israelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16621521896693000470noreply@blogger.com